The vans have improved what we can do at school. We can go places outside of the school, for example the ‘Y’ for gym, library, pool, greenhouse, and the Science Center. They are spacious and we can fit more people inside the van. We don’t have to take multiple trips anymore! Lastly, the van is more comfortable to ride in. It has music and this makes longer trips easier. This is why the vans have improved what we can do at school.  

Sincerely,

Classroom 5

(We wrote this paragraph collaboratively as part of a lesson on writing thorough paragraphs.)